Honest feedback:
First problem - Call Me Maybe YouTube vids are like apple pie at this point.
Everyone is doing it, so if you're going to do it, you better knock it out of the park, and this isn't up to par IMHO.
2nd problem with this video is that too drunk sorority girls are exactly who guys want to meet at sports bars.
So that just doesn't make any sense.
3rd premise is a good one, but that needs to be acted out better.
I'd suggest filming it in a sports bar.
Have a guy trying to just enjoy a beer watching the game and obnoxious sports guy spouting fantasy football nonsense in his ear, clearly annoying him.
To really add to it, have obnoxious sports guy checking an iPad for his fantasy scores.
And try and get someone with more screen presence if you can.
Since the whole idea of your video is people you don't want to meet at a sports bar, I'd suggest filming all your scenarios in a sports bar. How about the bar you're advertising for?
It doesn't really make much sense to have all these people outside of sports bars when you're trying to demonstrate why you wouldn't want to meet them in one.
Show why they are obnoxious in the Sports Bar setting.
Have these characters annoying someone trying to have a beer and watch a game.
Although, once again if you have a guy watching a game who is annoyed at a drunk sorority girl, people are just going to assume he's gay.
(not that there's anything wrong with that - Seinfeld).
How about the chatty bartender for a new category?
I've been there before.
Focused on the game and you have some chatty Cathy bartender chewing your ear off.
BPK is right about viral videos.
They can't be manufactured.
They happen on accident, but if your project is to try and make one, that can't be helped.
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